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Three words in April - contribution by one of our group



The morning mist, the stranger and the coincidence. Three phrases combined in one short piece of writing.  17/04/17

The morning mist was minding its own business, sitting quietly and nigh-on motionless on the hills. Yet everyone blamed the mist for the series of events that followed. The only crime that the mist might have committed was to leave teardrops of moisture on the filigree cobwebs and slender twigs of the hedgerows. And yet the mist was blamed.
Some said that if it wasn’t for the mist the coach driver would have seen the stag.
Others said that if it wasn’t for the mist the stag would have seen and heard the coach.
Either way the bus would have delivered the children to school on time and the stag would have walked majestically away to find his does.
As it was, however, as everyone said, the mist had intervened, got in the way, caused the first steps in a string of events.
A stranger to the area might have asked how the mist could be to blame for the hunt failing to find its designated quarry. The stranger might have enquired how the mist could be blamed for the twins being lost to the hillside for a whole day. And everyone will be keen to explain how the morning mist had caused the coach to swerve and become stuck in the ditch, the children to clamber from the coach to the safety of the road, the stag to change direction and head off away from its usual haunts, and how the twins had decided to follow it and explore that narrow track leading down the hillside away from the rest of the group.
The mist continued to mind its own business, as it been doing for centuries, and gently lifted itself up and drifted away.
The stag’s route and the twins track lead them all to a small and ancient farm nestling in the shadow of the hill. The stag moved cautiously past the farm house and into the small field beyond. He did not disturb the grazing sheep. The twins, feeling hungry and thirsty, approached the farm house door. It opened and they were welcomed in.
The coincidence of the stag and the coach each being on the same road at the same time could not be blamed on the mist.
The morning mist returns to its resting place upon the hill. A stag approaches, then cautiously with head erect, crosses the road and follows the track upwards to his familiar haunt. The twins, standing on their doorstep, wait eagerly for the coach to arrive and take them to school. They have so much to tell.
He morning mist has no tales to tell, it minds its own business.

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